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Inquiry – Presentation

We shared our presentation about bees. Miley, Gianni, Yavi, and Alicity were in my group. We presented so we can use our feedback for another presention.

First we watched our presention. After our presention is done, our score will be showen to us. Mr Wong does our score, while watching and hearing our presention.

Next we saw our score and got merit. Merit is the 2nd best score. For our imformation we got merit, For our print design rules we got merit, and for our talking in loud voice we got merit.

I enjoyed this task because our feed back was better than I thought. I need to improve on writing more information. I did well on talking loud.

Reading – Presention

My group shared our presentation about sharks. Riley, Genesis, Densyn, David, Zai Lett, and Bethany were in my group. We presented so we can improve on our reading.

First we got up and presented. David was the first one to talk and talked about the title, author, and the introduction. Riley was the second person to talk and talked about the introduction too. Densyn was the third person and talked about where sharks live, how many there are in the world, and how many are in New Zealand. For example: Riley talked about the body parts of a shark. Denysn, Riley, and David need to improve on using body language.

Next we presented the information script. Zai Lett talked about the information script. For example: Zai Lett talked about the 3 different groups, ray, skates, and sharks. Genesis talked about the good things about sharks. I was the last person to talk. I talked about what our group thought about sharks. For example: I talked about what the group thought and the bad things about sharks. Genesis and I need to improve on giving eye contact.

Lastly we got our score. We got our feedback for our presentation. My group’s score was merit. We got merit as our score because we wrote text details, 3 summarising text, layout, composition, text, and colour. My group needs to improve on talking louder and using body language. For example: body language is pointing at the text at the right time.

I enjoyed this task because we presented our work. I did well on writing my script because my group helped me on writing my script and our other groups script. I need to improve on giving eye contact to the audience. 

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